final small tweaks to description + outline

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diff --git a/isc24/CernVM-FS/description.tex b/isc24/CernVM-FS/description.tex
@@ -11,20 +11,20 @@ \subsection*{Overview and hands-on aspects}
 This tutorial is intended for people with a background or interest in using a uniform software stack on
 High-Performance Computing (HPC) infrastructure, % (system administrators, support team members, end users, etc.),
 and who are new to CernVM-FS\footnote{\href{https://cernvm.cern.ch/fs}{https://cernvm.cern.ch/fs}}.
-No specific prior knowledge or experience with it is required.
-We expect it to be most valuable to people who are interested in using or providing access to one or more existing
+No specific prior knowledge or experience with CernVM-FS is required.
+We expect this tutorial to be most valuable to people who are interested in using or providing access to one or more existing
 CernVM-FS repositories that provide a common software stack that can be used on HPC systems (and beyond).
 
 \paragraph{} 
-The tutorial will start by introducting CernVM-FS, explaining what it is exactly, and what it is mainly used for
+The tutorial will start by introducing CernVM-FS, explaining what it is exactly, and what it is mainly used for
 (world-wide distribution of software installations). The main features that CernVM-FS provides will be covered in detail,
 specifically in the context of HPC, including:
 \begin{itemize}
 \item Automatic and transparent on-demand downloading of repository contents;
 \item Automatic updating of repository contents as new software installations get added;
 \item Multi-level caching, to improve start-up performance of software;
 \item De-duplication of files and compression of data, which help with reducing the required storage space and network traffic;
-\item Automatic verification of the integrity of repository contents that are downloaded on-demand;
+\item Automatic verification of the integrity of repository contents that is downloaded on-demand;
 \end{itemize}
 
 The European Environment for Scientific Software Installations

diff --git a/isc24/CernVM-FS/outline.tex b/isc24/CernVM-FS/outline.tex
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ \subsection*{Outline (half-day format, 3.5 hours of tutorial content)}
 
     \item [00:00-00:30] \emph{(30min)} Introduction to CernVM-FS
     \item [00:30-00:50] \emph{(20min)} Example CernVM-FS repository: EESSI (incl. hands-on usage)
-    \item [00:50-02:00] \emph{(70min)} Accessing CernVM-FS repositories (hands-on), including:
+    \item [00:50-02:00] \emph{(70min)} Accessing CernVM-FS repositories (hands-on) %, including:
 %    \begin{itemize}
 %        \item[]- \emph{(30min)} Installing + configuring CernVM-FS client system (hands-on)
 %        \item[]- \emph{(20min)} Installing + configuring proxy server (demo), re-configuring client (hands-on)