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 Dear CRAN team,
 
 This is a major version increment due to the migration of the ECMWF APIs.
-
 Hereby, the package will drop the support of the old API in favour of the
-new one, confusingly still called "beta". I've added additional support for 
-the Copernicus Emergency Management System (CEMS) data store. 
+new one, confusingly still called "beta".
 
 The workflows remain largely the same with data requests
 backwards compatible with the previous versions. Some components such as
-legacy support for the WebAPI are removed. This service should have been
-removed a long time ago but is still there. However, use cases are few. I now 
-refer to the older v1 package for WebAPI support.
+legacy support for the WebAPI and CDS Toolbox are removed.  I've added additional support for 
+the Copernicus Emergency Management System (CEMS) data store. I now 
+refer to the older v1 (github) package for WebAPI support.
 
 For optimization, the batch processing script now also
-checks for duplicate filenames and reports this as such, limiting 
+checks for duplicate filenames, limiting 
 accidental data overwrites. Consolidation of the APIs authentication 
-leads to a more compact code base (thankfully), but creates some breaking
+leads to a more compact code base, but creates some breaking
 changes due to the omission of a 'user' argument (with a consistent default).
 
-These breaking changes are well documented, and migration should be as simple
+Breaking changes are well documented, and migration should be as simple
 as providing the new Personal Access Token and removing the user argument in
-API query functions.
-
-Consolidation of the API as the advantage that mixed queries of various
-services are now allowed. Mixing for example querying climate data from CDS,
-with atmospheric data from ADS in one batch.
+API query functions. Consolidation of the API has the advantage that mixed 
+queries of various data services are now allowed. Mixing for example querying
+climate data from CDS, with atmospheric data from ADS in one batch.
 
 Kind regards,
 Koen Hufkens