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 ### Configure email notifications
 
-1. From the gear menu in the upper right corner, choose **Notification settings**.
-1. By default, dbt Cloud sends notifications to the email address that's in your [User profile](https://cloud.getdbt.com/settings/profile) page.
+1. From the gear menu, choose **Notification settings**.
+1. By default, dbt Cloud sends notifications to the email address that's in your **User profile** page.
 
     If you're an account admin, you can choose a different email address to receive notifications. Select the **Notification email** dropdown and choose another address from the list. The list includes **Internal Users** with access to the account and **External Emails** that have been added. 
     - To add an external email address, select the **Notification email** dropdown and choose **Add external email**. After you add the external email, it becomes available for selection in the **Notification email** dropdown list. External emails can be addresses that are outside of your dbt Cloud account and also for third-party integrations like [channels in Microsoft Teams](https://support.microsoft.com/en-us/office/tip-send-email-to-a-channel-2c17dbae-acdf-4209-a761-b463bdaaa4ca) and [PagerDuty email integration](https://support.pagerduty.com/docs/email-integration-guide).
 
     <Lightbox src="/img/docs/deploy/example-notification-external-email.png" width="50%" title="Example of the Notification email dropdown"/>
 
-1. Select the **Environment** (in the dropdown) for the jobs you want to receive notifications about. 
+1. Select the **Environment** for the jobs you want to receive notifications about from the dropdown. 
 
 1. Click **Edit** to configure the email notification settings. Choose one or more of the run statuses (**Succeeds**, **Fails**, **Is Canceled**) for each job you want to receive notifications about.
 
 1. When you're done with the settings, click **Save**.
 
-    If there is another person you also want to send the notifications to, as an account admin, you can select another **Notification email** from the dropdown, **Edit** the job notification settings, and **Save** the changes.
+    As an account admin, you can add more email recipients by choosing another **Notification email** from the dropdown, **Edit** the job notification settings, and **Save** the changes.
 
     To set up alerts on jobs from a different environment, select another **Environment** from the dropdown, **Edit** those job notification settings, and **Save** the changes. 
 
     <Lightbox src="/img/docs/deploy/example-email-notification-settings-page.png" width="100%" title="Example of the Email notifications page"/>
 
 ### Unsubscribe from email notifications
-1. From the gear menu in the upper right corner, choose **Notification settings**.
+1. From the gear menu, choose **Notification settings**.
 1. On the **Email notifications** page, click **Unsubscribe from all email notifications**. 
 
 ## Slack notifications
@@ -55,19 +55,19 @@ Any account admin can edit the Slack notifications but they'll be limited to con
 
 ### Set up the Slack integration
 
-1. Go to your [User profile](https://cloud.getdbt.com/settings/profile) page and scroll to the **Linked accounts** section.
+1. From the gear menu, select **Profile settings**. On your **User profile** page, scroll to the **Linked accounts** section.
 1. In the **Linked accounts** section, find the Slack application and click **Link**.
    <Lightbox src="/img/docs/dbt-cloud/Link-your-Slack-Profile.png" width="75%" title="Link for the Slack app"/>
 1. Allow dbt Labs to access the Slack workspace. If you are a member of multiple workspaces, you can select the appropriate workspace from the dropdown menu in the upper right corner.
    <Lightbox src="/img/docs/dbt-cloud/Allow-dbt-to-access-slack.png" width="75%" title="Allow dbt access to Slack"/>
 
 ### Configure Slack notifications
 
-1. From the gear menu in the upper right corner, choose **Notification settings**. 
+1. From the gear menu, choose **Notification settings**. 
 1. Select **Slack notifications** in the left sidebar. 
-1. Select the **Notification channel** (in the dropdown) you want to send the job run notifications to. 
+1. Select the **Notification channel** you want to receive the job run notifications from the dropdown. 
     <Lightbox src="/img/docs/deploy/example-notification-slack-channels.png" width="75%" title="Example of the Notification channel dropdown"/>
-1. Select the **Environment** (in the dropdown) for the jobs you want to receive notifications about. 
+1. Select the **Environment** for the jobs you want to receive notifications about from the dropdown. 
 1. Click **Edit** to configure the Slack notification settings. Choose one or more of the run statuses (**Succeeds**, **Fails**, **Is Canceled**) for each job you want to receive notifications about.
 1. When you're done with the settings, click **Save**.
 
@@ -79,5 +79,5 @@ Any account admin can edit the Slack notifications but they'll be limited to con
 
 ### Disable the Slack integration
 
-1. Go to your [User profile](https://cloud.getdbt.com/settings/profile) page and scroll to the **Linked accounts** section.
+1. From the gear menu, select **Profile settings**. On your **User profile** page, scroll to the **Linked accounts** section.
 1. Find the Slack application in the **Linked accounts** section, click the trash can icon, and click **Unlink**. Channels that you configured will no longer receive Slack notifications. Channels that are configured by other account admins will continue to receive Slack notifications if they still have active Slack integrations. To migrate ownership of a Slack channel notification configuration, have another account admin edit the configuration.