Release note for job notification updates

website/docs/docs/dbt-versions/release-notes/02-Nov-2023/job-notifications-rn.md

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 There are new quality-of-life improvements in dbt Cloud for email and Slack notifications about your jobs: 
 
-- You can add external email addresses and receive job notifications from them. External emails can be addresses that are outside of your dbt Cloud account and also for configuring notifications in third-party services like Microsoft Teams and PagerDuty. 
+- You can add external email addresses and receive job notifications from them. External emails can be:
+    - Addresses that are outside of your dbt Cloud account
+    - Third-party integration addresses for configuring notifications to services like Microsoft Teams or PagerDuty 
 - You can configure notifications for multiple Slack channels. Previously, you could only configure one Slack channel. 
-- Any account admin can now edit slack notifications, not just the person who created it. 
+- Any account admin can now edit slack notifications, not just the person who created them. 
 
 To learn more, check out [Job notifications](/docs/deploy/job-notifications).